Earthquake (I thought of a title!)

Author	Message
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297	June 2nd, 2006 at 06:44pm Buildings Falling Crashing, Breaking People dying Disappearing Someone came And shook my world The buildings are What house my dreams Even thoughts Sometimes hope The people are my dreams Inside the buildings As I search through the Remains of buildings I find not 5, not 4, not even 3 But no survivors.
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297	June 2nd, 2006 at 07:02pm I must be a shitty writer. Oh well. +walks away+
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 2nd, 2006 at 08:11pm Hey, I really liked that. It was simple, yet effective. Nice flow, too.
Spirit Of '97 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 12	June 2nd, 2006 at 08:24pm 9/11?
wanderlust Addict Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 10418	June 2nd, 2006 at 08:41pm i liked it. at first it seems choppy, but you get use to it and it works well.
Goodbye, Norma Jeane King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4724	June 2nd, 2006 at 08:43pm No, you're not a shitty writter I thought it was decent.
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297	June 2nd, 2006 at 09:06pm Thanks all you peoples. I appriciate (sp) it.

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