The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | June 6th, 2006 at 12:24pm The title is kinda random and means nothing really... just some venting. Feedback appriacted =]
Perceptual and uneventful and the monotony of my demise sets in
Repeated, need of deletion and a strange way of thinking
A new medicament I desperately need.
A world evolution, a revolution
A solution to all my minor little worries.
Sometimes I think I’m just a boring person
In constant desire of a life to call my own
And other times I’m just deranged.
Exchanged for a noose with my name
Wrap my own hands around my throat
In true despondency
I turn to view in a mirror now broken shards across the floor
I’m strangling you
I watch in morose curiosity as your life ebbs away
And I feel myself get light-headed
Stubborn, acquitted and unready
To transmit his thoughts from yours to mine
This locale, void I swear
Will never gaze again
On your petulant stygian face
I swear it. |
I_Wanna_B_The_Minority
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2321 | June 6th, 2006 at 12:36pm wow amazing |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| June 6th, 2006 at 02:53pm It was good, but some of the words looked a bit unnatural in there. Like the biggers ones gave a very thesaurus impression. I'm not condemning the use of thesauruses, just try to tone it down a little bit. And if you just happen to have a large vocabulary...well, good for you.  |
