Rotten Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 671
 | June 6th, 2006 at 04:26pm My head is tired and I can't rest
As the same old day wears on
My mind jumpstarts at the sound of his name
But I can't forget he's gone
The spring in my step, the fall of my life
Seasons can't stop the inevitable
But as weeks pass by without a sign
I'm praying for an unlikely arrival
To far away to push for now
I hope you are happy wherever
And nothing else can save our vow
But I'll remember your name forever
(chorus)
I've expected to much, that's all my fault
While my memory rests in peace
I keep seeing you around now and then
But it turns out I know you the least
What you've given me was what I wanted
But I needed what you have condemned
The more I wish that you were right here
The less I can pretend
After all has hurt so far
We've finally moved on from there
There's a lot I could be mad about
But it's easier not to care
I'll see your face on the street one day
RIght next to the scene of a crime
The words you've said have led me here
And they'll leave me behind in time
(chorus) |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 6th, 2006 at 04:29pm I like that. It had this great bouncy, catchy feel to it. Keep it up, yo.  |
Rotten Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 671
 | June 6th, 2006 at 06:20pm Thanks very much! It's the first thing I've written in a while, so it's good to hear some feedback. Today a girl at school approached me about writing/singing/guitarring in a band, so I really hope we can get something started out here! |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 6th, 2006 at 06:22pm That would be pretty cool. You have to promise to post some music here if it ever works out.  |
Rotten Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 671
 | June 6th, 2006 at 06:24pm Of course I will! You guys have always been really great to me and supportive, so you're the first I would show! |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 7th, 2006 at 08:56am Awesome. |