pumpkin_head Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 23 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:31pm a wonderful man died today
he wasn't a poet
an actor
or a singer
he wasn't a scientist
he wasn't an inventor
he didn't discover anything
but he could love
and he loved his family
and took care of them
he helped the poor and needy
he lent a helping hand when you were down
a wonderful man died to day
he was my father.....
-Faith
copyright 2006 |
not_just_a_green_day_fan Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 377 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:38pm that is a really good poem |
pumpkin_head Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 23 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:45pm thanx....i wrote it cuz it seems like my dad is dead...cuz we dont talk anymore.... |
Whatsername409 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 70 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:49pm I like your poems.  |
Whatsername409 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 70 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:50pm I write poems kind of in that style too, where it deosn't have to ryhme but it just says what you want it to say. But yours are better. |