Yet another sad poem...

My friend helped me with some of the lines so some credit goes to her =)

Its a new sentace style thing im playing with at the moment so tell me if you think of any ways to improve it! im sure there's a whole lot!

Silence.
Not a word,
Will come from,
Her lips,
Silence.

Broken.
Like her heart,
She’s an echo of a soul,
Walking undead,
Broken.

Suicidal.
Feels the blade,
Brushing her wrists,
Contemplating thoughts,
Suicidal.

Funeral.
No one listened
No one tried to help,
Because of you,
It’s her
Funeral...

very good i like this cos i write poems simalar to what you have written i like/love it

It's pretty good, but there's many poems with the same theme.