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rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 02:45am I could fill a concert hall With the sound of my voice As I make the right choice To amplify the noise I rise every time you fall That’s the name of the game It’s really a shame That you’d have to go down in my name And I was always there To help pick you up When you needed a crutch And you were shit out of luck And I really cared When you needed me round I was there to be found But now you go down to my sound Paranoia seems Like an unjust reward Like who is this for Does he need it anymore? So turn your back on me And you’ll do it again It hangs on the end of a pen Afraid to leak through and to this pain put an end
[placebo] Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 78	June 10th, 2006 at 07:02am [smile] i like it. lol if you read only the bold bits it sounds like a poem in itself. or i might be weird. but its cool
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 09:19am InNoSence: [smile] i like it. lol if you read only the bold bits it sounds like a poem in itself. or i might be weird. but its cool thanks you a bunch lol ur not weird it's supposed to be like that when i am rhyming i still have fun wth it lol
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 10th, 2006 at 11:13am I really like that, Clark. The rhyming actually gave it a spiralling downward feel, and I usually don't like rhyming like that. Great job for making it work.
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 01:33pm Hardcore Panda!!1: I really like that, Clark. The rhyming actually gave it a spiralling downward feel, and I usually don't like rhyming like that. Great job for making it work. U USED MY NAME! O NOES! NOW EVERYONE HERE IS GOING TO RAPE ME INCLUDING YOU!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH jkjk thanks rhyming was getting annoying but i gave it a shot and it worked! w00t thanks you a lot
ladyramone Post Whore Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 21701	June 10th, 2006 at 01:34pm its awesome!
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 01:37pm [quote="ladyramone"]its awesome! [/quote why thank you
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	June 10th, 2006 at 01:41pm Not bad. Not bad at all.
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 01:53pm Pepperpot.: Not bad. Not bad at all. U HAVE SO MANY POSTS! lol sorry thank you
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	June 10th, 2006 at 02:01pm It’s good. Some lines are practically identical to lines in Green Day songs but that could just be a coincidence.
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 10th, 2006 at 02:04pm What's in a name?: It’s good. Some lines are practically identical to lines in Green Day songs but that could just be a coincidence. which ones? thanks though
Whitney. Idiot Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 507	June 10th, 2006 at 02:16pm its kewl i like it
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	June 10th, 2006 at 02:32pm rage;love;clark: What's in a name?: It’s good. Some lines are practically identical to lines in Green Day songs but that could just be a coincidence. which ones? thanks though When you needed a crutch And you were shit out of luck Perhaps it’s just because they are idioms? I think there was some more but it’s not important because it’s such a good poem.
rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494	June 11th, 2006 at 12:03pm What's in a name?: rage;love;clark: What's in a name?: It’s good. Some lines are practically identical to lines in Green Day songs but that could just be a coincidence. which ones? thanks though When you needed a crutch And you were shit out of luck Perhaps it’s just because they are idioms? I think there was some more but it’s not important because it’s such a good poem. thank you thank yoooo i spose i could see that analogy

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