Kinda Depressing Poems...

They are kinda depressing, but that's just who I am. Slightly depressing. Feedback appreciated?
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Duct Tape

There's tears that sparkle in her blue-green eyes,
as something within her slowly dies.
Her life is dispersing; gone from sanity,
Her life is hidden; nonsense in reality.

He asks her if these days she's fine,
oblivious to the way she walks the line.
At the clubs; dancing up a storm,
without leaving her home; safe and warm.

So much she cannot say or do,
lacking in life what was once true.
She forgot what she lived for then,
it's not her choice to choose an end.

He held her close and she shoved him back,
one more night she can hit the sack.
She's going to stop this joy ride,
I am no good at suicide.
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She's A Rebel

She's a rebel.
In her own sort of way.
Non-conforming atheist.
And rejects lables as we say.

We don't know her,
But better than some.
Family's always ignorant,
The emotions don't come.

Forcing ties between us,
Who knows why you cry at night.
It's relatives and memories,
Which make me die with fright.
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The Singer

She sings her own songs into the mic,
Listening to the audience scream.
Beyond those happy faces and blank stares,
she feels lack of comfort in the air.

The sky is falling in droplets,
which hit the ground hard.
She doesn't understand why,
She seems to be falling with it.

Long ago she would've wanted,
wanted so much more than this.
This eternity which cursed and left,
nothing but timed to be filled.

The moments tick by,
her notebook in blank.
She hates to believe,
There's no more inspiration.

There is nothing left to her,
she had fallen in love.
She had fallen from love,
and was naught but someone else.
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Feedback? Please?[/b]

I like the first and last ones. They're good.

=) Thanks...writing's kinda a hobby I think I might persue...

i like the second one the most, but they're all good.
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nice poetry, i have a website for that kinda stuff, tis on my profile

Yay =) Thankies

They're alright.
Nothing spectacular.

Meh. I have to agree with that actually, they're not my best work. lol, anyways...

I liked them a lot. Especially "She's A Rebel", because the first stanza sounds like me.

I somewhat liked the first one. Work on your flowing a bit, it's really off, and don't try too hard to rhyme.

I like them.
You have talent.

Aww, thanks =)