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Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | June 13th, 2006 at 04:23pm SPilling words onto this page,
While deep inside my battles rage.
Keep it them close by my side,
I can no longer live inside.
Turning colors to pass the day,
Tracing the shadow of where you lay.
So here I will sit until the end,
For on these words our lives depend.
SHut out from the open sky,
From which they fall and slowly die.
Catch an angel in the sea,
Exploring the world beneath of me.
One more favor to return,
One more match is left to burn.
As this picture carfully fades,
Alll our lies will be repaid.
i don't think I like it I want your opion, It sounds too familiar. |
TheFaggot
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4675 | June 13th, 2006 at 04:29pm It's kinda classic, but it's still got that new expression. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | June 13th, 2006 at 04:37pm I like it. I think the rhyme worked well for such an overused rhyme scheme.  |
