no more tomorrow

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pumpkin_head Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 23	June 9th, 2006 at 10:42pm i hurt myself today trying to find a purpose in life i killed myself today trying to stop the paind you buried me today trying to make it through i'm gone today and you're gonna miss me there is no more tomorrow
[placebo] Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 78	June 10th, 2006 at 07:19am um, its alright. i like the first 4 lines, then it kinda drags on. even though it doesnt drag for long... ANYWAIZ. its alright.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	June 13th, 2006 at 10:13pm it's ok, but... ummm... yeah anyway, yeah it's ok
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 13th, 2006 at 10:16pm It's not original, it lacks any flow. It wasnt thought provoking, it wasn't vivid, it didnt have any poetic elements Just because you type something like this and have more than one line doesnt make it a poem.

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