When Silence Turned To Anger...(Too long of a title)

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Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:29am
Haaa. Inari and me both have title issues. Rolling Eyes

I think I feel a series of poems coming on, a story...Hm...Enjoy!

Dedicated to Inari for helping me feel better about my redundancy...lol.

When Silence Turned To Anger, When The World Tried To Change Her

The golden eyes just couldn’t abstain her;
That is to say, tame her,
the fiery soul of lead and molten ash,
the beast with skin so pale it
dimmed the brightest flames.
Plan A was to run; so was Plan B.
Primal instincts come to bay with her freedom at stake;
Why give it up?
Why sacrifice to a miracle that would never come to be?

Burn the fires, burn them all,
emotions and apathy begin to fall.

Adrenaline rushes as it fuels her hate,
to the world, to reality, to her memories sake.

Chronic disorders in extremity
hide the tears she had never borne;
regardless of her inability she wept
away the nights,
the nocturnes,
the comets fell at her feet;
For none could stop adrenaline;
None could calm the beast within;
But through anger, morbid illusions seeped past the surface,
the fragile glass of sensitivity;
A single shard misplaced leads to an orchestra of avalanche,
an array of chaos as it all begins to crash.

Panic, destruction, light the way to fate;
A fate consumed, a life deceived,
the dagger brought her to her knees;
Impaled, betrayed, utterly afraid;
None were left to comfort, the vultures idly remained;
“loyally” at her side,
to lick the scars and wounds away,
to remind her of her lies;
But the golden eyes remained ajar,

the golden eyes were now--
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:31am
that really good! Cool
Zoie
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:32am
Shocked Wow, Eli. That was beautiful. I really, really loved that.
Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:33am
I love you more, n00b. Cool

<3 I love you all, thanks!
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:33am
I like the skipped rhyme. It creates an awesome flow and give the free verse part a beat. I like the theme of the poem, it's different than alot of stuff on here.
Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 10:34am
I_worship_tre_Cool:
I like the skipped rhyme. It creates an awesome flow and give the free verse part a beat. I like the theme of the poem, it's different than alot of stuff on here.


Yeah. I tried to aim for different this time, since I started feeling...very redundant. Thanks! I hoped it would come out all right, I'm gonna try and write some other things similiar yet different in flow...
Inari
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June 14th, 2006 at 12:36pm
Eliana Rampage:
Dedicated to Inari for helping me feel better about my redundancy...lol.


Shocked
The Anti-Prose dedicated a poem to me.
*dies*

Lol.
Beautiful.
Incredibly beautiful.
Uberly incredibly beautiful.
(Yeah. You get the picture Wink )
Meski
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June 14th, 2006 at 12:44pm
I liked it
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June 14th, 2006 at 01:16pm
It's amazing Shocked

*has nothing more to say*
Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 04:47pm
<3 Inari: You're more beautiful Very Happy Hah. Kiss

Ellen: <3 Ily <3

Thanks guys!
Toxic Teeth
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June 14th, 2006 at 05:01pm
I likey.... Very Happy
Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 05:08pm
Thanks. o.o
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June 14th, 2006 at 05:19pm
*does like a beat box thing* What what is this?

Yeah, I know, what the hell, right? Well I know what it is. And it's Eli's uberly wonderful extra terrific poem that Panda really really loves. Retard

Yo, you feelin' me? XD
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June 14th, 2006 at 05:20pm
Surprised another one of your poems!!
my teddy bears will enjoy this one, it's awesome as usual Very Happy
Eliana Rampage
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June 14th, 2006 at 05:21pm
YO.
FAST KIDS PUNX. GO GO GO. I READ JOO FOO.

<3

YEY FOR LADYRAMONE'S TEDDY BEARS.
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