Beloved One

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miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	June 15th, 2006 at 06:12am Beloved One Beloved one, why are you crying again? How can so many tears fit into your eyes? Don't you know that someone's right beside you who wants to help you, hold you, make you smile? Beloved one, why do you feel so much pain? It kills me to see you suffer every day. Please try to just let go and fly away with me, far away, and no one will ever hurt you again. Beloved one, why are your glances so sad? All the time I see a shadow in your eyes, a shadow of fear, pain, desperation. So many times you cried into my shoulder and told me you just want to be accepted by the people. Beloved one, just stay with me.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 15th, 2006 at 06:14am It's okay.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	June 15th, 2006 at 06:15am I really liked it. Not too sure what it was about it that I liked so much... but I thought it was really good.
miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	June 15th, 2006 at 06:17am WTF? I just posted it and already two comments? Anyway, thanks.
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 15th, 2006 at 11:56am I love the simlpicity of it, you didnt over do language and you werent boring with your word Choice either. I liked it.
miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	June 15th, 2006 at 01:07pm Thanks.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 15th, 2006 at 01:09pm I like ^^
miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	June 15th, 2006 at 01:11pm Das ist ja nett von dir.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 15th, 2006 at 01:36pm Man wie nett ich bin
miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	June 15th, 2006 at 01:43pm Ja, wirklich.

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