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tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
tAcOs!-Jay
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83
June 9th, 2006 at 04:49pm
Your eyes hide the truth
The lost treasures of your youth
Your eyes hide the lies
No one can deny you
With those unmistakable eyes
No one knows the truth you hide
Behind your cold dark green eyes
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
newagecarny
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495

Mibba
June 9th, 2006 at 05:04pm
I don't like it.
ancient
Had A Life Before GSB
ancient
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 29697

Blog
June 9th, 2006 at 05:17pm
It's okay, but it's too short.
rollerpig
GSBitch
rollerpig
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283
June 9th, 2006 at 05:27pm
What I like:
The two Avatars above me ..

What I don't like:
The Poem ..



EDIT: That was cruel sorry XD
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Emily-Cool
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657
June 9th, 2006 at 06:09pm
well i thought it was actually ok.. if people are gonna say they dont like it.. then at least say why..coz that may knock ur confidence a bit. it was slightly short BUT ur quite new, and that wasnt bad 4 a 1st time poem. just needs some work. Cool
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Dehren McGhengland
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206
June 9th, 2006 at 06:58pm
I didn't like it. Sorry.
tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
tAcOs!-Jay
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83
June 15th, 2006 at 02:05pm
i actually wrote this for mi ex after he dumped me............he even saw it! it was so embarassing he found mi poem book and showed all of his friends! they still laugh at me!
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