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rollerpig
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rollerpig
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283
June 16th, 2006 at 09:20am
Ella:
That's amazing!

- You didn't try too hard.
- You used the right amount of metaphores.
- Your flow is excellent.
- There's something about it that seperates it from most of the poetry here.

"My friend, so lacrymose and still,
When a sorrows well is full,
You sough to call, and Hold."
^Beautiful.

Honestly there's not much more to say except I hope you post more often, because I love your work! Very Happy


-nods- Very Happy

It's amazing!
Sylar
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Sylar
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 5703
June 16th, 2006 at 09:53pm
Esther sweetheart! I love it! Much better than mine! Hug
Remarkable Rocket
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Remarkable Rocket
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 5761
June 16th, 2006 at 09:55pm
Mikko Lindstrom:
Esther sweetheart! I love it! Much better than mine! Hug

Oh pshhht.

I love you Smile.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921

Mibba
June 16th, 2006 at 09:57pm
I really love that. It was different than a lot of the poems I've seen and the subject matter was very original. You used just the right words, too. Very Happy
Addison Montgomery.
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Addison Montgomery.
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078

Mibba Blog
June 17th, 2006 at 11:00am
Short and sweet.
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