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Tihana King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3263	June 19th, 2006 at 06:01am u tihoj patnji blage noći u krevetu toplom ali praznom leži umorno tijelo moje i suza u oku govori sve sve ono sjećanje na nešto što je bilo davno a srce bolno steže u meni kao da me nešto guti sad znadem da je sreća namijenjena samo onima koji srce nemaju dušu ne posjeduju strast ne poznaju ljubav ne vide ali sreća znaju što je jer srce imam dušu posjedujem strast poznam ljubav tražim ali za srećom plačem
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 19th, 2006 at 06:06am It's okay, not really my favourite thing to write about. You could try seperating it into stanzas next time. Pretty mediocre, actually.
bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 49428	June 19th, 2006 at 06:10am I like it.
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	June 19th, 2006 at 06:11am Huh?
Lissie! Falling In Love With The Board Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 7305	June 19th, 2006 at 06:17am Yeah I really do understand that
Tihana King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3263	June 19th, 2006 at 07:18am ^.^
Faith Addict Age: 39 Gender: Female Posts: 11507	June 19th, 2006 at 08:29am Someone should translate that I've already terrorised too many Luky songs with my attempts of poetic translation - original is always better But I think someone should try
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 19th, 2006 at 08:43am Faith: Someone should translate that I've already terrorised too many Luky songs with my attempts of poetic translation - original is always better But I think someone should try May I?
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	June 19th, 2006 at 08:46am Ella: Faith: Someone should translate that I've already terrorised too many Luky songs with my attempts of poetic translation - original is always better But I think someone should try May I? I think you should o.o I'd rather want to be able to understand it...Heh...I wonder if Croatian is hard...o.o
Tihana King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3263	June 19th, 2006 at 09:19am in a silent pain of a mild night in the bed, warm but empty lies tired my body and the tear in my eyes tells it all all of the memory of something what was so long timea go but painful heart squeezes in me like something is choking me now i know that happines is meant to those who dont have a heart soul dont recognize passion dont know love cant see but happines they know what is cause i have a heart soul i own passion is known to me love i seek but for happines i cry for ...
Tihana King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3263	June 19th, 2006 at 09:19am (translation)
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 19th, 2006 at 09:20am Here goes. The Suffering Turns To Death In the silent suffering of the tender night In a bed, warm but empty Lies the tired body of mine And the tear in the eye says it all All the memories of something That happened long ago and The heart painfully chokes inside me As if something's consuming me Now I know that happiness Is meant to only those Who have no heart Own no soul Know no passion See no love But know what happiness is. For I have a heart I own a soul I know passion I look for love But I cry for happiness. The croatian version sounds better I hope no one minds me doing this. It's just to show others the concept of the poem.
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	June 19th, 2006 at 09:21am You know...I actually sort of like that. It's not my style, but it actually does seem different than what most would write concerning a topic such as that. I think if you fixed it up, like, spelling, grammar, and polished it, it would be pretty good. Nice job translating, thanks for doing so!
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 19th, 2006 at 09:21am Sorry, I didn't see you do it.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 19th, 2006 at 09:23am I like it I read the whole croatian version, and try to understand something xD
Tihana King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3263	June 19th, 2006 at 09:40am Ella: Sorry, I didn't see you do it. ne sve pet (nah, all is great lol)

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