WeeHez90
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 76 | June 18th, 2006 at 09:48pm When you think the worlds begun
Don’t pull the trigger on that fuckin gun
You know that nothings worth the end
Except your dear old funny friend
When friends say nothings close to call
You’ll know the story sure will fall
Down the drain, through all the pain
You scream his name again and again
But no more sorrow dry them tears
Cause now she’s here you have no fears
Let her hold you for she’s your friend
You know she’ll need you now and again
But don’t you dare reach for that pen
Cause pain aint worth it just fuck the men |
mybassgoesdirntdirntdirnt
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 150
 | June 18th, 2006 at 10:27pm i like this alot. really, i do. i like the ryming and the flow  |
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078
 | June 19th, 2006 at 11:17am It's really good because of the flow of the ryhme. |
WeeHez90
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 76 | June 19th, 2006 at 11:37am thanx for the support guys, it's my first ever poem so i thought i might aswell put it on here and see wot ya all think. |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:08pm wow.i really like it! |
bi_bu_ra
Rotting On Here
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 49428
| June 19th, 2006 at 05:14pm I like it. Really. |
