Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219
June 20th, 2006 at 12:48pm
Another story-type song.
This one has a bittersweet ending.
He gets what he wants...but...
Missed the last bus out of town
Friends left him in the dust
If he wished it away
He'd have nothing to do
He'd rather have it this way
Broken down
Worn out
Busted up and bled
He's just a burnout
That got left behind
And he wants to get away
They kicked him off the last train out
With his suitcase of broken dreams
He buried it along the road
Cross tipped over
It's only left him half-dead
Broken down
Worn out
Busted up and bled
He's just a burnout
That got left behind
And he wants to get away
Filing paper and khakis
Are his uniform of choice
Replaced his piercings and plaid
Steriotyped to no end
Blew the brains out of his head
Broken down
Worn out
Busted up and bled
He's just a burnout
That got left behind
And he wants to get away
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
June 20th, 2006 at 12:50pm
Wow.
Cool.
Loved: They kicked him off the last train out
With his suitcase of broken dreams
He buried it along the road
Cross tipped over
It's only left him half-dead
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161
June 20th, 2006 at 01:11pm
I'm starting to really love your style of writing
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
June 20th, 2006 at 07:06pm
Steriotyped to no end
Blew the brains out of his head
^Flow issues there. Other than that, really good. =]
