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I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019
| June 21st, 2006 at 09:03pm I always wanted to be a good girl.
Someone smart and nice.
Not some crazy chick.
Whose full of sugar and spice.
Those who make it sound good.
Will maybe tell you what for.
That the truth about the spice.
Is that you can't get it from a store.
Everyone knows about alcohol and drugs.
But it's not big until you're offered it.
I've always steered away from that.
But why am I now accepting this bullshit?
I've tasted things I've never thought I would.
Even had one smoke or more.
I didn't see what was so great about it.
But still I opened the wrong door.
So maybe I haven't done drugs.
But I could've and might.
Inside I felt excited.
Even though I knew it wouldn't be right.
I've gone through bad times.
And then I grabbed a blade.
I always told my self "This won't help."
But words will always fade.
Now this good girl I dreamt about.
Has shortly disappeared.
As I got older.
I did the things I feared.
I broke promises with my family.
And sadly myself.
I'm no longer a good girl.
She's just another book on the shelf. |
the resistance. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4898
| June 21st, 2006 at 09:23pm I like it  |
Sara. This Board Is My Home
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 31155 | June 21st, 2006 at 09:27pm That's Awsome.
I Love the ending, |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019
| June 21st, 2006 at 09:52pm Thanks. =D |
Toxic Teeth Idiot
 Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645
 | June 21st, 2006 at 09:59pm I LOVE IT!
I really liked the first part because I could really relate to it.....'cept I dont want to be a good girl.  |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019
| June 21st, 2006 at 10:33pm Yeah, but I meant like.. when I was younger. Like a child. A little girl. |
*Death*Do*Us*Part* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:29pm I love it! =D |
Kid_Gates Geek
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:41pm 'Tis good! |
WhitestMonkeh!U'Know King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4864 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:49pm wow!
I love it.
The ending was great!  |
neen bean Addict
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 10733
 | June 22nd, 2006 at 07:04pm That was a very good poem. I loved the ending lines. |
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786
 | June 22nd, 2006 at 07:11pm It's ok.. rather cliche and the rhyme scheme seemed a bit forced in places.
Keep trying yo. |
Give 'Em Hell Kid Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 267 | June 22nd, 2006 at 07:20pm I liked it a lot |