Fashion Zombies! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1168
 | June 26th, 2006 at 10:26am This was when one of my close friends at the time yelled at me because I got a guy to say she's pretty and he liked her to try and raise her self esteem. She would always talk of suicide and it scared me so I felt I had to do this. And this is the poem I wrote after she yelled at me. Then I got really angry at her and...Yeah
It's not my fault you see the world differenlt
It's not my fault my rights are your wrongs
It's not my fault i tried to help
It's not my fault you took it wrong
It's not my fault its the meanest thing that someone has done to you
It's not my fault you dont want to be friends anymore
It's not my fault you cant accept me for my mistake
It is my fault im saying "GET LOST ALYSSA" |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| June 26th, 2006 at 10:43am I don“t like it. At all. The repetition in some cases positively affects the poem, but not in this case. |
Fashion Zombies! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1168
 | June 26th, 2006 at 10:47am Mmkay that's fair enough everyone is allowed to have an opinion and I respect yours 
Now when you do mention it it's actually quite annoying the "It's not my fault" at the start of every sentence. |