Breathe Like The Dead {not really a poem}

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WeeHez90
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WeeHez90
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June 17th, 2006 at 10:58am
This isn't actually a poem it's a verse from a song i wrote but decided to put it on any way's tell me wot u think plz. Smile




Why do we get the blame
For something we haven’t done
Why do we have to clear up the shit
That we didn’t leave behind
Why do we have to live on shit
When others get their sweet release
And you get so fucking screwed
That you don’t no what to do.
VIXENBITCH
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VIXENBITCH
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June 25th, 2006 at 09:55pm
I didnt like it!
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Idiot
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June 26th, 2006 at 06:33am
mmm, its okay.
Meski
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June 26th, 2006 at 06:58am
Who sung that?
newagecarny
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Mibba
June 26th, 2006 at 10:51am
The swearing is redundant.
Garrett Hanlund
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June 26th, 2006 at 10:55am
Ella:
The swearing is redundant.
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