Revenge Is A Dish Best Served With Blood [Sorry Its Cliche!]

Okay! One of my longer song/poem things. I don't know what to call it coz i reckon its not long enough to be a song, but its git a chorus type thing. Ah whatever.

Under the moonlight,
Clench your fists,
Together as one,
The ones they said weren’t worthy,
Weren’t worthy of your recognition,
We tried not to listen or to care,
But you pushed us too far,
Now our apocalyptic souls bear though,
Bringing the end to the innocent heartbreak

So now we show you,
Show you, what we can do,
Making the earth shudder,
The lighting crash,
Around your tear filled faces.
You wrecked the barrier,
Holding us back,
Now you’re death days coming fast,
And you still think,
You have time for another tormenting jibe,

A meteor shower of hate,
Burns deep into your skin.
Control the minds,
Of the satanic undead,
That will shred your flesh.
It’s the blinding crusade,
Of every trashed heart,
Every bruise and every cut,
Now the pain is twisted into anger…

So now we show you,
Show you, what we can do,
Making the earth shudder,
The lighting crash,
Around your tear filled faces.
You wrecked the barrier,
Holding us back,
Now you’re death days coming fast,
And you still think
You have time for another tormenting jibe.

Beg all you want, plead all you like,
Your screams are nothing to us,
As the last star burns out,
We stand together, now having triumphed,
The “unworthy” Slag’s, Bitches and Bastards,
Standing tall finally proud,
Proud of the revenge unleashed on
Those who tormented them so,
But where are they now…

Awesome!! I have this little saying right;
Revenge is always Sweeter when it Hurts

Very nice, though I think you meant 'cliche' not 'clique' in the title.

i liked it.
awesome job!

Muffin.:

Very nice, though I think you meant 'cliche' not 'clique' in the title.

Oh Yeah! Thanks I will change it.

sweeeeeeet. i like it lots