Im Just Another Fucked Up Housewife To You

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robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423	June 29th, 2006 at 02:11am Is that what you want me to be? You tell me to get an education so I can choose freely. Yet you turn right around and tell me Ill just be another fat housewife with five babies I have nothing against housewives and their abilities But that just aint me! It must be strange that I say I prolly wont get married huh mom? Since you were raised in the 50's Times have changed duh! But every woman in my family says I should find a good man Who doesnt make me work Prolly one who beats me cause its his money What a Jerk! Ill just sit there hanging on to my kids Cause I forgot what I learned in college Only living off his checks I dont want that for me! Thats why I cry! But thats something you dont SEE! ................................................... Ok, most of you probably wont like this but if you really knew how my mom puts me down about stuff you'd get it ._. So I tried with this poem and I really put emotion into it but if all my words arent atleast 8 letters long people will think its shit comments?
.Ashley. Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: - Posts: 5248	June 29th, 2006 at 02:24am I like it!
well.durr__hXc™ King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3226	June 29th, 2006 at 02:24am Doesn't really seem like a poem.... but i'll give you an A+ on emotion if that makes you feel any better.
.Ashley. Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: - Posts: 5248	June 29th, 2006 at 02:25am Were you mad when writing that?
GreenDayCastaway Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8517	June 29th, 2006 at 02:26am it's pretty cool...
robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423	June 29th, 2006 at 02:26am .Ashley.: Were you mad when writing that? mad? o.0 Kinda Bad? o.0 maaaybe.
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	June 29th, 2006 at 02:27am =o It doesn't flow well in parts, I can't say it's apoem, but I loved it.
robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423	June 29th, 2006 at 02:29am =/// maybe ya'll should rap it when you read it. sounds a bit better
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 29th, 2006 at 09:27am That's not a poem. And check your spelling next time please.
[Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572	June 29th, 2006 at 10:32am its emotional.
robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423	June 29th, 2006 at 07:44pm Ella: That's not a poem. And check your spelling next time please. why isnt it? o.0 and why do I need to spell things right? >_<
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 30th, 2006 at 06:55am Sheepo@_@: Ella: That's not a poem. And check your spelling next time please. why isnt it? o.0 and why do I need to spell things right? >_< It's not a poem because prolly, huh, duh. are not words. You need to spell things right because it's the basic of writing ANYTHING you want people to understand.
robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423	June 30th, 2006 at 09:45pm Ella: Sheepo@_@: Ella: That's not a poem. And check your spelling next time please. why isnt it? o.0 and why do I need to spell things right? >_< It's not a poem because prolly, huh, duh. are not words. You need to spell things right because it's the basic of writing ANYTHING you want people to understand. you can understand those words.
tAcOs!-Jay Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 83	June 30th, 2006 at 10:28pm koolness

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