| Author | Message |
|---|
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | July 3rd, 2006 at 03:49am dance with knifey
cut and slicy
dripdrop dripdrop
look at the blood,
theres a lot
cry in the crorner
cry like a baby
sook and whine
pretend your not fine
bangbang
bang on your door
you said they didnt care
so why are they there
dancecrybang
life goes on
dripsookcare
they're standing there |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | July 3rd, 2006 at 04:35am I didn't like it at all.
The flow was ok, but the whole poem seemed to contradict itself. And I can't figure out what "sook" is |
steph.
Banned
Age: 32
Gender: -
Posts: 66449
 | July 3rd, 2006 at 04:39am Zoie-cuz it's trendy:I didn't like it at all.
The flow was ok, but the whole poem seemed to contradict itself. And I can't figure out what "sook" is It's an Australian word I think.  |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | July 3rd, 2006 at 04:43am Steph Is Not Punk Rock:Zoie-cuz it's trendy:I didn't like it at all.
The flow was ok, but the whole poem seemed to contradict itself. And I can't figure out what "sook" is It's an Australian word I think. Oh, ok, well I wouldn't know, seeing as I'm not Australian.  |
Megan.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 6962 | July 3rd, 2006 at 05:18am Zoie-cuz it's trendy:Steph Is Not Punk Rock:Zoie-cuz it's trendy:I didn't like it at all.
The flow was ok, but the whole poem seemed to contradict itself. And I can't figure out what "sook" is It's an Australian word I think. Oh, ok, well I wouldn't know, seeing as I'm not Australian. WTF Steph
I don't think it is. |
Meski
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
| July 3rd, 2006 at 05:18am It sounds like a kid show theme song, like those "lets kill barney" songs we used to sing, at least I did |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
 | July 3rd, 2006 at 05:22am Errrmmm... Whadafux up wit dat? I don't like the non-spacing between words. It didn't really flow... I think. (I'm not good at the flow bit) I didn't like it, personally. I'm not saying it wasn't good, but it wasn't my favorite. |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 3rd, 2006 at 05:27am mmm... its okay. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| July 3rd, 2006 at 06:57am I am really disappointed in you right now. |
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | July 4th, 2006 at 12:13am Ella:I am really disappointed in you right now. so am I. That was shit. |
Whitney.
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 507 | July 4th, 2006 at 12:16am lol it wuz like "ok." |
