Yearnings And Affections
| Author | Message |
|---|---|
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 |    Sweet, lovely star child, Come closer, my dear I want you to forget everything they told you All the safety measures they pressed onto you I know they warned you beseechingly against The seething dangers of sin But deep inside, didn't you feel all the time Their safety was nothing more than deception An imposture A lie And everything they promised were tales Fairy tales to keep you from life The life you've been craving in all those nights You spent awake and far from sleep Musing images of hopeless dreams And now I'm here to give you what you need My enchanted star child, My beauty with eyes of the night, Intoxications of darkness Sighing breaths of liquor Blessing shudders of heated desire Writhing beneath the pale mesh of flesh Lose yourself in your yearning of years Wrapping yourself into my shadow Execrated star child, You'll follow my calls You've been surmising my presence all those nights And you've been searching for me in the dark Unbearably close now, almost withing reach I'm your deepest desire, your most addicting wish Come and catch me |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | I adore it.  Especially the 'star child' lines. |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921  | I read that with a creepy narrative voice in mind.  I love it. Your poetry has its own unique style that's really cool. |
| [Your Best Mistake] Idiot Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 551 | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Wow, thanks so much, guys! |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Inari: Thank you, darling.  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | I love it. It feels real, and not just like some words on a screen. Excellent job, dear. Hardcore Panda!!1: *nods* so true |
| rollerpig GSBitch  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Hardcore Panda!!1: I had that creepy narrative voice in my mind when I wrote it, actually.  Thank you, my dear panda.  |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | TreCoolIstSoGeil: What's in a name?: Thank you so much, guys. |
| rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | snowcherry:  You write the best poems!  |
| xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186 | |
| [Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Thanks so much, guys. |
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