You Stole My Heart

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Sarah.
King For A Couple Of Days
Sarah.
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4490
July 7th, 2006 at 01:07am
This poem is for ym girlfriend, our 6 month anniversery is coming up soon.
I know its short but I suck at long poems so yea...
And also the last part, "You stole my heart but you can keep it" is our favorite quote, I didn't make it up lol.
Good or no? I'm going to give it to her but I just wanna know if its ok first Razz

We’ve been together 6 amazing months,
And we’re still going strong,
We’ll be together soon,
I swear it won’t be long.
We’ll sit together under the midnight moon,
I’ll play our favorite song.
If only I could feel the warmth of your hug,
I’d be even more sure that this is love.
You stole my heart,
But I’m pretty sure you can keep it.
Sarah.
King For A Couple Of Days
Sarah.
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4490
July 7th, 2006 at 10:26pm
Alright!
Thanks for the feedback...
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Mibba
July 7th, 2006 at 10:36pm
It was sweet. Not the best poem-wise, but I'm sure your girlfriend will absolutely love it. Very Happy
Sarah.
King For A Couple Of Days
Sarah.
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4490
July 7th, 2006 at 10:38pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
It was sweet. Not the best poem-wise, but I'm sure your girlfriend will absolutely love it. Very Happy


Thanks, I know its not very good writing lol, I'm not too good when it comes to that but I tried Razz
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