Fucking Thanks to You

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Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976	March 15th, 2006 at 09:09pm What would you do if I disappeared, What would you do if I decided to run away? Would you cry, Would you mourn, Would you weep, Would you care? And here I am again, Wishing so hard to scream And I know that feeling Will be here all my days. Fucking thanks to you You dragged it all out But it wasn't meant to be shared It's just you and your goddamn ignorance Seeming to rip me up again What a beautiful day to waste away With aggrivation and anxiety What a hideous night to make last With someone like you Well I'm running low on faith these days And it's getting harder and harder to see I need to find a way to release my pain I need to find a way to escape from myself Fucking thanks to you
Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	March 15th, 2006 at 09:24pm The flow is odd but... I love it <3. HIGHFIVE O:!
Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976	March 15th, 2006 at 09:27pm Oh Mistress, I Confess: The flow is odd but... I love it <3. HIGHFIVE O:! Thanks. Yeah, it kinda had no flow. I was kinda lazy. :/
Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	March 15th, 2006 at 09:28pm Jordyn: Oh Mistress, I Confess: The flow is odd but... I love it <3. HIGHFIVE O:! Thanks. Yeah, it kinda had no flow. I was kinda lazy. :/ Stop being lazy uh... fatty . Although I shouldn't say anything. I wanna post me song but I won't get up and get the page from me journal :B.
Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976	March 15th, 2006 at 09:31pm Oh Mistress, I Confess: Jordyn: Oh Mistress, I Confess: The flow is odd but... I love it <3. HIGHFIVE O:! Thanks. Yeah, it kinda had no flow. I was kinda lazy. :/ Stop being lazy uh... fatty . Although I shouldn't say anything. I wanna post me song but I won't get up and get the page from me journal :B. Maybe I'll fix it up later. As for you, kiddo, get off ye rump, copy, and paste.
Margasm Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1447	March 15th, 2006 at 09:33pm Cool. Looks good.
The.Crazed.Spork Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1167	March 15th, 2006 at 09:34pm I like it
Vanity and Death King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2129	March 15th, 2006 at 10:29pm I liked it.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	July 7th, 2006 at 09:01pm ... That poem was a waste of this site. 1 Keep writing... you'll improve... I hope.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 7th, 2006 at 09:56pm billiejocrazeds: ... That poem was a waste of this site. 1 Keep writing... you'll improve... I hope. That was awfully rude of you, honestly. If I got a comment like that, I'd be absolutely livid. Get some manners. Or at least tell her why you thought so. As for the poem, it was simple and not the most original. The flow was all over the place. But overall, it was okay. Not terrible. Not even bad. I like your other poems better.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	July 8th, 2006 at 02:33pm Dude, have you ever heard of honest criticism? Anyway... Why should I apologise? That's the exact same thing she said to me when I started out writing poetry, so why should I be sorry, sooner or later she got what she deserved!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 8th, 2006 at 02:34pm Even if she said the same to you, does that make it right? I don't think so. It's alright to say that you think it wasn't good. But don't even go to where it's a waste of this site. That's awful.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	July 8th, 2006 at 02:38pm Okay. What should I say then? This was a fabulous poem.. and I hope you write more?! What if that's not what I want to say... what if I want to say this poem wasn't all that good? I can't help it if I feel that way. But anyways whatever..
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 8th, 2006 at 03:33pm Well look at my comment on the poem. I said I didn't particularly care for it without coming across as completely sadistic.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	July 8th, 2006 at 03:47pm Yeah whatever.
The Rev Addict Age: 38 Gender: Male Posts: 14004	July 8th, 2006 at 09:15pm OMG I LOVE IT! <3
Killed To Be A Goth Angel King For A Couple Of Days Age: 39 Gender: Female Posts: 2988	July 8th, 2006 at 09:16pm Claps I <3 it!!
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	July 9th, 2006 at 06:30am billiejocrazed, learn some fucking manners. You could at least have the dignity to offer come constructive critism to Jordyn! Jesus, you know, you should really be ashamed of yourself. Even if Jordyn said that to you, you should still suck it up and be a better person. (no offence to Jordyn) This thread is for writters to post their works, and ask for oppinions and constructive critism, not bashing. If you're going to bash other writters, don't comment at all. That was rude and uncalled for. Now, as for the poem...heh...how... emo of you Jordyn. I liked it, it showed a different side of the hard-assed Jordyn I know. The flow wasn't that good, but that was already covered. Hmm. I also liked your others better. Oh well, keep writting, don't litsten to the little kids who think they are high-and-mighty.
DaveyHavok666 Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250	July 9th, 2006 at 01:17pm Hey guys, listen. Jordyn, I'm sorry what I said and what I'm about to say you might think Im weird. I didn;t write that. My account was hacked. I think my friend might have found out my password and hacked my account, she is really rude and thats why she ws writing all this mean stuff down. Sorry once again. I don't know what she was talking about this was a perfectly fine poem!

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