The Dark One

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Protest the Hero.
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Protest the Hero.
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July 9th, 2006 at 08:13am
The one who sits before the moon,
is the one who will bring your doom,
The end is approaching,
what will you do,
if "the one" that's spoke of
happens to be you?

I know it isn't that great. I wrote it two years ago (I was eleven.) , when I first started writing. What do you think?
Inari
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July 9th, 2006 at 08:14am
That's pretty good considering it was written when you first started writing. Smile
Protest the Hero.
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July 9th, 2006 at 08:16am
Inari:
That's pretty good considering it was written when you first started writing. Smile

Thanks.
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Mibba
July 9th, 2006 at 02:28pm
It's short but it's actually pretty cool. =]
DaveyHavok666
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July 9th, 2006 at 06:54pm
AWESOME *10*
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