xRAWR<3
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 9 | July 9th, 2006 at 09:40pm You fool; don't you see her weaping?
She isn't crying for nothing.
It was you who hurt her.
It was you who murdered her soul.
It was you who made her cry.
But what will you do to make her smile again?
Nothing?
Isn't it in your interest if she's happy?
It should be in your interest for it was you who made her cry.
You alone can restore her.
But you don't want to.
The monster in your soul forbids you too.
Now watch her bleed, watch her apologise to you,
With her last breath. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
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  | July 10th, 2006 at 02:49am I don't know why, but I didn't really like it. Not saying it's not great! Just something about the way it was written turned me off a little, I guess. It was good, though. Keep at it. |
