Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 12th, 2006 at 02:09am We danced this night while memories hung above
Like little paper lanterns illuminating the sky
We held on our wrists priceless gold watches
Counting every second that flew on by
Curling her fingers around my neck
She murmured soft promises in my ear
I laid my forehead against her own
Watching the stars shine in her every tear
The lanterns fell and time halted to a stop
I reached for her shaking hands again
A crack in the earth had formed between us
And I was sure love amounted to nothing then
Our bond broke apart, her face became a blur
But I live to learn and so I learned to live
Those paper lanterns still light up my sky
And somehow I know they'll never give |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
  | July 12th, 2006 at 02:14am The flow is a bit off in parts, but other than that it's great. =] |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 12th, 2006 at 11:11am Poseur:The flow is a bit off in parts, but other than that it's great. =] |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 12th, 2006 at 11:31am Wow.
That's really beautiful.
I love that. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | July 12th, 2006 at 12:18pm I like it =] Sweet |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| July 12th, 2006 at 04:53pm Can't you think of a title yourself?
I will not respect you as a writer until you start being more original.
No matter how good your poetry may sound. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | July 12th, 2006 at 05:57pm It's really nice  good job |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 12th, 2006 at 09:05pm Ella:Can't you think of a title yourself?
I will not respect you as a writer until you start being more original.
No matter how good your poetry may sound.
Titles don't really mean that much to me, I just think of the first thing
that pops into my head.
I called it Paper Lanterns because the song inspired me to write the poem.
It's sort of like a dedication to Billie Joe's song.
And I don't see why someone wouldn't respect me because of one poem,
I've written over a hundred others...all with original titles. |
Tahm York
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 31394
| July 12th, 2006 at 09:10pm Ella:Can't you think of a title yourself?
I will not respect you as a writer until you start being more original.
No matter how good your poetry may sound. |
