TrEsXBiAtChX12
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3754 | July 14th, 2006 at 11:44pm After a Breif Hiatis
From the Bio Classroom
Due to a Minor
Bleeding Fit
I walked back
Hearing beautiful music
There he was
The Boy on Guitar
His Singing voice
Did send
Shivers Down
My sensitive Spine
He sent me into
Another wprld
Another fantasy
In My school days
With a smile
In my deep Musing
My Heart Raced
As he played each song
Was I falling for him
Spinning into his web
Of Beautiful Love
And Creative pleasure
That's when I knew
I fell in love
With Someone unexpected
The Boy on guitar |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 15th, 2006 at 05:42am i love it!
awesome-ness. |
k-contentbarrier-
Addict
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 14139 | July 16th, 2006 at 12:05am i thought it was good, keep it up! |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | July 16th, 2006 at 05:10am It was okay.
There's no need to capitalize every word.
And you have a few misspelled words. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | July 16th, 2006 at 05:19am I don't like it that much. :/
It's okay. |
