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Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
 | July 15th, 2006 at 06:05am My vision turns black and white
seeing you in such pain is torture to the heart
just one beat and it could be all gone
you, me and the people around
like a finger to a thorn
it'll bleed till it cannot bleed no more
Hold you tight till everything has passed
the life around has scarified us both
suffocating the air in which we breath
to make us feel the pain we loath
Like the cradle to the grave
Till the past has faded
I’ll be by your side through thick and thin
Your blade to shave
Those insecurities that make us human
I’ll always be here if you fall.
Your net. Your one and only. Your Cassie
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LOL. I never post mine. o.o
But kay, I was told I should so yah. Hope its not too bad =/ |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 15th, 2006 at 06:13am I like that!!
I must say, the title attracted me.
I wrote a poem with the same exact title on here not too long ago.
Then like a day later, someone made a poem with the same title!
Strange... |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
| July 15th, 2006 at 06:17am Santa Billie:I like that!!
I must say, the title attracted me.
I wrote a poem with the same exact title on here not too long ago.
Then like a day later, someone made a poem with the same title!
Strange...
I wrote it 2 weeks ago. =/ |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | July 15th, 2006 at 06:21am I loved it.  |
wake the dead.
This Board Is My Home
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 30440 | July 15th, 2006 at 09:13am Gorgeous, Cassie. Simply gorgeous =] |
Plug In Baby.
Addict
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 11334 | July 15th, 2006 at 09:40am Wow, thats awesome. I like it, its really good. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | July 15th, 2006 at 11:17am I didn't really like the first stanza but the rest was really great. You're good with words.  |
Whitney.
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 507 | July 15th, 2006 at 11:33am shweet.
loved it. |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
| July 15th, 2006 at 12:01pm Ella:I didn't really like the first stanza but the rest was really great. You're good with words.
Thanks Ella, from you thats an amazing compliment. 
xD I was just venting. |
Basketcase463
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 4608 | July 15th, 2006 at 12:10pm i liked it. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| July 15th, 2006 at 12:13pm Harder To Cassie:Ella:I didn't really like the first stanza but the rest was really great. You're good with words.
Thanks Ella, from you thats an amazing compliment.
xD I was just venting.
I'm not that important. Or evil. 
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Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 11:33am it purdiful...i liked it |
Explicit Sins.
Geek
Age: 48
Gender: Male
Posts: 231
| July 17th, 2006 at 05:28am i like it ...it's so real! |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | July 17th, 2006 at 05:41am as I told you when you first showed it to me
"wonderful"
I still like it because it's raw emotions
well done |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
| July 17th, 2006 at 06:12am I'm_Pretty_In_Punk:i like it ...it's so real!
 Well its not a fairy tale. |
StJimmyRules182
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3 | July 17th, 2006 at 06:43am lovely  |
Cupid Stunt
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 235 | July 17th, 2006 at 07:00am Woah, beautiful, just beautiful. You have talent my friend! |
