Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 07:47pm It's nice to know I have a friend like you
It's nice when I know I can sit and talk to you
About my life
About my worries
About....anything
I love that I have a friend that cares
I love that you're always there
To catch me fall
When I screw up
To hold me
When I'm crying
It's nice to know.......
.....that I have you
This is for my friend...I'm thinking about giving it to him on his Birthday |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 16th, 2006 at 09:39pm Again. Decent. Forced rhyming, and not much of a flow... |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 17th, 2006 at 02:40am its okay. nothing special. sorry. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:08am The divine Suicide of Kym:Again. Decent. Forced rhyming, and not much of a flow...
wat do u think i need to work on? |
