Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 11:27am Your faults were my own
I left you all alone
I didn't give you a chance
I wouldn't even glance
you way
And evryday it's all the same
But I'm the one to blame
For making you feel this way
Making you feel hated and lonely
I did this only
because I was jelaous of you
I knew your heart was true
And mine....full of lies
Things that can't be left behind
Things....that hurt other people I care about
I'm jelaous of you
And I will do
Anything....I can so you won't be happy
This entire year
I worte this in a persons point of view...I'm sad to say that she was once my friend |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 16th, 2006 at 03:04pm Rhyming seems very forced. |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 225 | July 16th, 2006 at 03:09pm i really liked it. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 07:41pm thanx =D |
new.slang
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 764 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:15pm The divine Suicide of Kym:Rhyming seems very forced.
Agreed |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 18th, 2006 at 12:27am it was okay... |
Goodbye, Norma Jeane
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 4724 | July 18th, 2006 at 12:50am I thought it wasn't bad at first. But halfway it got kinda...eh. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:13am ok....wat do u think i need to work on? |
ohmygodshutyourbutt
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 769
 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:30am it's ok |
