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newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	July 17th, 2006 at 09:47am I gave myself a task to write something in a certain visual form. This is really different than what I usually write but I hope it still has an Ella touch. It's about internet friendship. Dedication = Kristina. Notice the alliteration too. Cheers. Recklessly Oversensitive My friend, your life is a vanilla flavoured lie. I can only tell by your mirror eyes How your heart crumbles. I can only hope my own mirror eyes Show no pain of loss. My love, you are as fragile as an infant. In this metropolis you break With eyes widely closed. Too young to fight the heavy words alone, I beg for affection. My enemy, you cross-dressed crook. How dare you believe in Fairy tales of our tomorrow? If I promise I will sin when I breathe, But you deserve nothing less.
Robin Sparkles This Board Is My Home Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 30432	July 17th, 2006 at 09:56am I like. The first lines of each stanza are marvelous. Well done!
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	July 17th, 2006 at 09:57am That's different, and interesting .. I like that How dare you believe in Fairy tales of our tomorrow? The rest as well.
Krackers Had A Life Before GSB Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 27675	July 17th, 2006 at 10:15am
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	July 17th, 2006 at 11:20am Wow. I loved that.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	July 17th, 2006 at 01:25pm Beautiful, as always And yes, I noticed the alliteration. 'My friend, your life is a vanilla flavoured lie'. My favourite line.
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	July 17th, 2006 at 03:44pm OSM!
[Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572	July 18th, 2006 at 12:16am awesome stuff.
Bittersweet World Banned Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 28301	July 18th, 2006 at 12:38am My god woman. You blow my mind everytime.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	July 18th, 2006 at 11:25am Thanks all
miau King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469	July 18th, 2006 at 11:34am It's great. You can write about ordinary everyday things and make them seem wonderful and fascinating. Wow.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 18th, 2006 at 11:36am Wow. You are A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

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