Miss Misfit Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 265 | July 21st, 2006 at 09:15am Im awake your asleep the sun will
rise just like it did the other day
you the one I cant replace.
I see you and you see me
together we could never be
somthing you had planed all along
Deep down its falling apart
Deep down its just another broken heart
Another lie set in stone
Cant think of words to say
If you should ever walk my way
Gone would come out so easily
You were right I was wrong
Could we at least try to keep this strong
one more time
We are both waiting for somthing that will never return
Its hard enough to look at you
and know you dont feel the way I do
So why dont you just go when I say Im gone?
Its hard to explain.
But the feelings began to drain the life from me
I tried my best not to hang on everyword you said
but still your in my head
The truth is the truth even if you dont want to hear it
we came so close but now we're no where near it
I could stand infront of a million and only see your face
but it wouldnt matter much to me or to you
because we're just trying to fill an empty space to add to a book of empty pages.
When your forced into somthing you dont belong
its not long before the regrets run strong
you walk by with out a glance
steal a kiss just by chance
it hurts so to know you want to go
even when Im feeling in the same way
I have mixed feelings about this one.
I like parts of it...and then I dont like parts of it.
but what do you guys think? |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| July 21st, 2006 at 09:19am It's okay, but check your spelling.  |
Miss Misfit Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 265 | July 21st, 2006 at 09:22am Ella:It's okay, but check your spelling. 
I know...
it could do with some better grammer. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | July 21st, 2006 at 11:18am I really liked that one.
The truth is the truth even if you dont want to hear it
we came so close but now we're no where near it
I could stand infront of a million and only see your face
but it wouldnt matter much to me or to you
because we're just trying to fill an empty space to add to a book of empty pages.
I'm in love with that part. |
Nathalie. Addict
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 11756 | July 21st, 2006 at 11:19am I like it. |
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206 | July 21st, 2006 at 04:16pm It wasn't the greatest, but it was good nonetheless.  |