Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
 | July 21st, 2006 at 05:58pm Haunted
She was haunted by kiss
That she had wished
She was haunted by death
The more she was haunted she wept sitting in the grave yard
She was haunted by the wind
The air of a cool night breeze
She was haunted by a touch
The touch of a human's hand
The more she was haunted she wept sitting in the grave yard |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 21st, 2006 at 06:00pm Um...
It just ends...
Like, I don't know...maybe you could think of a better ending? |
Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
| July 21st, 2006 at 06:03pm Thanks!! I have made a better ending.  |
Rotten
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 671
 | July 21st, 2006 at 08:35pm not bad...I agree with Santa Billie about the ending though. Keep up the good work though! |
whersermind
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 165
| July 21st, 2006 at 11:12pm yes, i also agree, but i likey!! make something horrible happen to her (sorry, i am in an evil mood) |
Ghostie.
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 495
| July 21st, 2006 at 11:31pm Ooh...I likie. It's really cool. *10* |
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
| July 21st, 2006 at 11:41pm Uh...
o_0 |
