It's Not Like You Care (I Feel)

Author	Message
keasbey King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3660	July 22nd, 2006 at 12:03am
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	July 22nd, 2006 at 06:16am Repetitive. Cliche. You could've just used a thesaurus, for all I know. This has been done so many times before.
Sylar Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5703	July 22nd, 2006 at 06:30am Kind of pointless. There's no feeling to it. Underminded? Do you mean undermined?
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	July 22nd, 2006 at 07:21am The overused repetition makes it dull. And even with some work the idea behind it would still strike me as something overused and uncreative. You're only 13, you have your whole life ahead of you, you shouldn't be writing with such negativity.
tomamazon GSBitch Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 68084	July 22nd, 2006 at 07:24am I write better than this...and I'm 11. It is repetitive and meaningless. Work on it..
Emily-Cool Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 6657	July 22nd, 2006 at 07:38am It is kinda meaningless, you are trying to express yourself.. but in the wrong sort of way..

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