Ahhhh!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1372 | July 21st, 2006 at 09:13pm I saw the light
At the end of the tunnel
It was flashing
Buy me today
The words were so demanding
I guess I was not understanding
What it took to get respect
What it took to be cool
Looked at the man behind the counter
He spoke up a little louder
Ill cut you a great deal
so you can be cool too
Sell me something marketing man
Say those words I don't understand
Give me your name and your slogan
Show me sublime tell me spoken
give me all you got
Have me begging for more |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 22nd, 2006 at 06:19am I loved the first verse; it was really different. I love the cynicism in your poetry. I think this is one of my favourites by you. |
Ahhhh!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1372 | July 22nd, 2006 at 01:18pm  thanks a lot. Coming from a writer like you, thats a great compliment. |
JOOLS
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
  | July 22nd, 2006 at 02:14pm Awesomeness |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 22nd, 2006 at 06:46pm That's cool.
I really like that.
Sceptical but deep. |
