igotsosickofcrying
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3206 | July 23rd, 2006 at 05:21pm Hey. So here is this poem, I just wrote it, realizing that I have a new friend, who I can count on. And you can give me your best shot. I know it's not amazing, i know you will say its "average", but im not a poet, english is my third language, but i feel that I need to post it.
I open a grey book:
The holy book of lies,
All these heavy words about you and I:
Friendship lasts forever,
You promised.
Remember?
You dont know me like I do,
My secrets are burried deep inside my heart,
Your words should be the key,
But my mind tells me to stop.
I dont let you in.
You understand every thought of mine,
Yell at me at suicide times.
Does worth it, you and I?
Friendship can end.
Please dont lie.
Hours of my life, spent here with you,
Four years with tears and laugh,
I thank God you're my cure,
Dont trust the books.
Experience. |
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657 | July 23rd, 2006 at 05:43pm I actually really like it! great flow! its way above average, and English is your 3rd language! wow !  well done |
Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
 | July 23rd, 2006 at 07:19pm I love it a lot!! NICE  |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:51am That is actually really good.
I like it  |
