Suicide amongst one of the thousands rains

Heavy rain drops were falling on her tender bright hair
And her body unconsciously enjoyed in the sound
of contact of rain drops and warm earth
Her mind didn't want to enjoy at the returning
of small drops on dreamy world
Her legs guided her to the place, on which was born innocent love
That grew into the biggest romance of the small city

She convinced her brain that this
heavy premonition just can't be true
But when her feet quickly hurried on the way,
on which she was walking for thousand times
She smelled the catastrophe and sadness instead of the wet earth
When she arrived on soaked meadow full of yellow flowers
She noticed the person, which meant the world to her
White as snow, with the sliver handle of
an expencive bayonet in his heart
As so many times before her dark premonition came true
And she knew she has to do that

Suicide amongst one of the thousands rains

I like it, especially the fact that you used a bayonet in it. That was really cool. As for some suggestions:

Heavy rain drops were falling on her tender bright hair
And her body unconsciously enjoyed in the sound
of contact of rain drops and warm earth
Her mind didn't want to enjoy at the returning
of small drops on dreamy world
Her legs guided her to the place, on which was born innocent love
That grew into the biggest romance of the small city

Not only are the bolded words forms of the same word, but they're not used in a grammatically correct way. I would suggest that you replace the first with reveled, and the second one with rejoice.

Really liked that.

Thank you.