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Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
July 23rd, 2006 at 03:18pm
Wow.
I'm loving that last line.
And I'm loving the way that you put questions at the end of every verse.
Really, really effective.
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
July 23rd, 2006 at 03:22pm
Awesome Very Happy One of your best, I think. And I absolutely adore the last line.
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King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
July 23rd, 2006 at 04:18pm
That was absolutely wonderful. Very Happy Gotta agree with everyone else when it comes to the last line as well. Perfect. Stunning. Splendid.
davey jones.
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davey jones.
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Mibba Blog
July 23rd, 2006 at 04:27pm
Wow. I loved it. Excellent. Up
tomamazon
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Mibba Blog
July 24th, 2006 at 12:55pm
thank you!


I hoped to write a good poem, because I've been feeling down.
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