Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
 | July 22nd, 2006 at 07:08pm My Immortal
As I sit here alone
In the dark silent night
My soul hurts
I have become immortal
No one knows my pain
The pain is too much to take
The emptiness one only knows
I have become immortal |
Ghostie.
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 495
 | July 22nd, 2006 at 09:34pm You're so talented! Jeeze! I love you're Angle Billie Joe poems. And this one's just as good as thoes. =D |
Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
| July 22nd, 2006 at 09:42pm TeenagexLobotomy:You're so talented! Jeeze! I love you're Angle Billie Joe poems. And this one's just as good as thoes. =D
Thanks!! I do appreciate it. The only bad thing is that my parents think my writting is dumb. |
+Hybrid_Theory+
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 78 | July 22nd, 2006 at 09:50pm Whoa, your good!! *claps* |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 23rd, 2006 at 05:22pm Eh. Didn't do much for me. Doesn't have much flow, I don't think. |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
| July 24th, 2006 at 01:23pm Power to the Peaceful:Eh. Didn't do much for me. Doesn't have much flow, I don't think.
And it was too short. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 24th, 2006 at 02:31pm It really isn't anything special. There's nothing that makes it stand out, because it's just the same ideas that have been used so many times before. Maybe using a metaphor would make it a little more interesting. |
