Blockade Of Perfected Poetry.

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The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
The Doctor
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Mibba Blog
July 24th, 2006 at 12:36pm
Yup, don't ask, don't tell.

Today nothing seems to fit
in the jigsaw of life.
I feel like a piece from another
puzzle, another mess of
peculiar shaped oddities.

Sleep drags out my numbed
unconsciousness and yet I never truly
am awake. Drifting around
like a ghost of a shadow.
It makes me wonder why.

I can't feel your touch and
I can't grasp your hand.
I sit and stare into empty space.
Morning dew wets the miserable
tuft of turf that endlessly grows outside,
Outside in the humid harsh sunlight.

I tear up every last shred of
attempted empathy and callously
thread them to tread the outside wind
with razor sharp nouns and
fierce merciless punctuation.
Those words, wrapped in a robust
barbed wire that stings the very eyes
that read them.

I sit back at my desk and try again,
try to sum up my lengthy horizon
of thoughts into neat tidy lines,
and yet again, I draw a blank.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
July 24th, 2006 at 12:47pm
I really liked that.
Cynical. Poetic. Beautiful.
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
The Doctor
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Mibba Blog
July 24th, 2006 at 12:48pm
Inari:
I really liked that.
Cynical. Poetic. Beautiful.
Thanks! I've been getting inspiration from Sylvia Plath
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
July 24th, 2006 at 12:56pm
Joan of Arc of Suburbia:
Thanks! I've been getting inspiration from Sylvia Plath


Damn! That chick rocks so much Very Happy
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
The Doctor
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Mibba Blog
July 24th, 2006 at 12:58pm
Inari:
Joan of Arc of Suburbia:
Thanks! I've been getting inspiration from Sylvia Plath


Damn! That chick rocks so much Very Happy
I know ^_^ she's damn good.
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King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
July 24th, 2006 at 02:13pm
Wow, I LOVE this one. The imagery is awesome. Very Happy Very Happy
Peter Petrelli
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Peter Petrelli
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July 24th, 2006 at 02:34pm
Joan of Arc of Suburbia:
I've been getting inspiration from Sylvia Plath


And it really shows. I love it. I really love this one. Just the way you're able to put the words together, it seems so simple but when you read it closely it's really clever and complex. Very Happy
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