IxAmxMe
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 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:16pm I wrote this peom after I had explained to my ex that I used to be a cutter. He just called me retarded, and the hurt me a lot. We wouldn't support me, only make me feel bad. That wasn't what I needed. He and I are talking agian, and we aren't fighting. I still like him, and supposedly he likes me too. Oh well...I hope youlike the poem!
Razorblade Regrets
All I tried to do was make you understand,
all I needed was support from a friend.
But you labled me as retarded,
Were you trying to make things worse?
Did you hate me?
I was only asking for help.
Anger is all I fret,
but from you, I bet,
all you wanted from me,
were razorblade regrets. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 24th, 2006 at 04:27pm Anybody like it? |
Santa Billie
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Posts: 8285 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:35pm I like it. It's...not different from other stuff...
But it's good, and I like the last two lines. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 24th, 2006 at 04:40pm oh, it's not? i havent read any of the other stuff. i wrote this a long time ago, anyway. |
Santa Billie
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Posts: 8285 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:45pm BillieKilledOprah*UR-NEXT:oh, it's not? i havent read any of the other stuff. i wrote this a long time ago, anyway.
Well I don't mean other stuff on the site.
Just other teen poetry in general.
I don't think it's bad to write about self-mutilation/harm, it's just sort of
common and cliched...you know?
[hope that isn't spam]
Anyways, it's good to write about stuff like that, so yeah, I don't want
to say it's dumb. Cause it's not. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 24th, 2006 at 05:43pm ok...  |
The Doctor
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 | July 24th, 2006 at 06:58pm It's cliched and it didn't flow.. to me anyway..
Keep trying though |
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161 | July 25th, 2006 at 07:01am Santa Billie:Just other teen poetry in general.
It just seemed cliched, and average to me. But don't give up. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 25th, 2006 at 05:43pm it's old... |
SugarGreen
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Posts: 3369 | July 25th, 2006 at 11:59pm "razorblade regrets."
This does not make sense. You need to add more to the poem to explain why that is in there. |
Addison Montgomery.
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| July 26th, 2006 at 11:37am That's my sort of poem. =D |
IxAmxMe
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| July 26th, 2006 at 02:17pm glad you like it. |
