IxAmxMe
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 | July 22nd, 2006 at 07:51pm She's melting away,
day after day,
slowly drifting from the good reality.
He sees her inside,
trying to hide,
The pain she's suffering from all that is unhealthy.
She pierces her wrist,
the pain that she missed,
self-destruction and thinking no one cares.
He comes to her door,
falls to the floor,
begging on his knees for awnsers, telling her he cares.
She sits alone,
waiting for someone to save her.
Pulls out her Bible,
but it doesn't to any good.
He watches her kill her best friend,
slowly but surley,
with metal at hand,
she sinks down low, for good.
He looks at her thirteen year old eyes,
he feels so memorized,
he still hasn't been able to find a reason.
She chatches him staring,
"Go away, you're not caring,
about me anymore. So just get away from me."
He kneels at her doorstep,
she comes with a knife in her hand.
He looks at it fearfully,
from the blood it's tanned.
He asks her why.
She starts to cry,
at he holds her tight.
She feels loved,
and like somebody cares.
But while being held,
she dropped it,
into her wrist,
and it ripped through her viens.
And that was the last he saw of her pain. |
Bat_Country_Chick
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 | July 22nd, 2006 at 08:19pm AMAZING!!! I love it very much.  |
IxAmxMe
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| July 25th, 2006 at 05:21pm thank you  |
HelloBeautiful!
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Posts: 215 | July 25th, 2006 at 05:36pm Dood. I lurve it =]
Mad skills. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 25th, 2006 at 05:41pm thanks agian! |
SugarGreen
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Posts: 3369 | July 26th, 2006 at 12:07am It makes little sense. The person will not die from the cut of one wrist unless they and the person with them helped it along.
"She pierces her wrist,
the pain that she missed,
self-destruction and thinking no one cares.
He comes to her door,
falls to the floor,
begging on his knees for awnsers, telling her he cares. "
This is not normal behavior. If you see someone with a bleeding gash when you come to the door, usually you help them to stop it from bleeding if they aren't doing it themself. WTF? He just stands there and watches her bleed then hugs her and lets her drop the knife onto her other wrist? What kind of idiocy is this?! |
IxAmxMe
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| July 26th, 2006 at 01:40pm thanx for the support, jaguire.  |
Toxic Teeth
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| July 26th, 2006 at 01:50pm in the begining it sounds like something i might write....good job, bravo!   |
IxAmxMe
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| July 26th, 2006 at 02:20pm thanks! glad you like it! |
