IxAmxMe
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Gender: Female
Posts: 327
 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:38pm Sing your song,
dance your dance.
But why would you ever give me another chance?
I appoligized,
you critisized,
and if I weren't here tomorrow,
would you have cared?
To try to save my life,
you wouldn't have dared.
And you know the reason why I never showed you the scars.
I'm just another drop of rain, falling from the stars.
All I need is the physical pain, and no more than fears.
With these damaged hands,
I can't wipe away the tears.
You said, "I love you,
I would never let you go."
But I guess all these things,
were impossible to show.
I said, "I love you two,
I'll always be with you."
But why did I trust and belive you?
I should have been smarter.
Why the hell did I try harder?
And you know the reason why I never showed you the scars.
I'm just another drop of rain, falling from the stars.
All I need is the physical pain, and no more than fears.
With these damaged hands,
I can't wipe away the tears.
I said, "I love you two,
I'll always be with you."
But why did I trust and belive you?
I should have been smarter.
Why the hell did I try harder? |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 24th, 2006 at 04:41pm That's pretty good. |
IxAmxMe
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Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 327
| July 24th, 2006 at 04:43pm thank you! |
IxAmxMe
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 327
| July 26th, 2006 at 02:47pm what can I do to make it better? |
