Duct Tape

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SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369	July 26th, 2006 at 11:49am What duct tape is used for is not taping your child to a chair you ass What got into your head You filled me with dread all this because I cleaned the house and lost weight you creep!
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	July 26th, 2006 at 01:30pm Seriosuly, I know my punctuation sucks but, you really needed something in there. Also, it seemed rather short and there was some vague from of rhyme scheme, but then ity disappears again... and the parts that did seemed a bit forced... but keep it up
IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327	July 26th, 2006 at 02:48pm yeah, it's really forced.
Sarah. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4490	July 26th, 2006 at 11:40pm I don't understand it at all O_o
Santa Billie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8285	July 26th, 2006 at 11:57pm Um wow. Yeah, I don't get it. at first I thought this was a thread for like "Duct Tape" the band... Cause I remember that was blink-182's original name when it was just like Mark and Tom...
Fink. Geek Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289	July 27th, 2006 at 12:07am -punctuates- What duct tape is used for is not taping your child to a chair, you ass. What got into your head[?] You filled me with dread. All this because I cleaned the house and lost weight, you creep! -fixes line breakage- What duct tape is used for, Is not taping your child to a chair, you ass. What got into your head[?] You filled me with dread. All this because I cleaned the house and lost weight, you creep! yeah, its confusing. i dont really get it. but i fixed the punctuation&linebreakage ^.^
k-contentbarrier- Addict Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139	July 28th, 2006 at 01:37am well i dont get it

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