IxAmxMe
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 | July 26th, 2006 at 03:05pm I don't care about the hateful things you say.
They won't bother me anymore,
and I think here I'll stay
here where I belong, ignoring you.
I'll get others to follow.
You think I'm hurting them.
I think I'm helping them.
They don't want to deal with you.
You've got nothing better to do.
Pick on someone else,
not the weakest links.
Yeah, you're such a tough guy.
That's why you've got nothing to say,
that's why youre on the brink,
of self destuction and fear.
Go ahead and hate me.
But I'll promise you this:
I won't shed a tear. |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
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Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | July 26th, 2006 at 03:09pm I didn't like it.
Maybe you could use some metaphores or imagrey(sp?)
it might make it more...poetic.
Keep trying though. |
IxAmxMe
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| July 26th, 2006 at 03:09pm ok, thanks. |
IxAmxMe
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Posts: 327
| July 27th, 2006 at 05:28pm What else? |
HelloBeautiful!
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Posts: 215 | July 27th, 2006 at 05:32pm I like it, actually. =] |
IxAmxMe
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| July 27th, 2006 at 05:45pm Thank you, Taking Back Saturday! |
IxAmxMe
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Posts: 327
| July 28th, 2006 at 12:59pm What else can I do? Anyone? Please? Any suggestions? |
