Bat_Country_Chick
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 | July 27th, 2006 at 08:32pm We Wonder
We wonder what it's like to be rich
Wonder what it's like to be famious
We let our imaginations wander
We look to the future with ambitions
We wonder what the future brings
Wonder what will become of us
We wonder what tomorrow is like
We look to the future with ambitions |
IxAmxMe
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 | July 27th, 2006 at 08:41pm I LIKE THIS POEM!  |
Rocking_Bass_Chick
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 15 | July 27th, 2006 at 08:42pm I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are an amazing writter |
Bat_Country_Chick
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Posts: 842
| July 27th, 2006 at 08:42pm Rocking_Bass_Chick:I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are an amazing writter
Thanks!! |
La La La...Fuck off.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 74 | July 27th, 2006 at 08:42pm oh that's good. |
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
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Posts: 6657 | July 28th, 2006 at 04:52am it seems a bit unfinished? maybe a few more descriptive verses would be an idea... |
Bat_Country_Chick
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Gender: Female
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| July 28th, 2006 at 04:53pm Thanks!! I'll have to take that into consideration. |
Emily-Cool
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Posts: 6657 | July 28th, 2006 at 05:35pm Queen Goth Chick:Thanks!! I'll have to take that into consideration. you get better each time you write though |
Meski
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| July 28th, 2006 at 05:38pm I'll have to agree with Emily-Cool, maybe you should finish it with
But do we wonder how other people starve?...
Something like that, I like it though |
