The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | July 29th, 2006 at 05:12pm Hold onto my soul with invisible thread.
Forgiveness is needed, post haste.
I didn't mean to do what I commited,
I made a stupid mistake.
I'm the human appendix.
I'm the fruitfly.
I'm sorry.
I deserve your anger,
I deserve your mistrust.
I deserve to cry.
I'm sorry. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 29th, 2006 at 05:14pm Kinda strange, but I really like it for some reason.  |
Insurgentes
Post Whore
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 23688
| July 29th, 2006 at 05:21pm It's beautiful...
And it's okay.  |
Retro Suicide
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 103 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:32am It's alright, way too short. I'd add a lot more, but that's just me. I think you should add on, make it a really long poem maybe. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 30th, 2006 at 06:54am I agree. It was really surreal and different, but could perhaps need a little more to it. But otherwise, it was good and had heaps of potential. |
