Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:11am Another girl dies
In her sequened lies
Heartbroken on takeoff he flies
Stole her heart
Right from the start
We all knew there was nothing we could do
Wake her up
On the bathroom floor
Wipe her tears
Cure her fears
Tell her everythings alright
Take her down
With those monsters
She'll be fine
Just tell her everythings alright
And he sighs
As she cries
With her sequened lies
Torn apart
From the start
We all knew there was nothing we could do
Wake her up
On the bathroom floor
Wipe her tears
Cure her fears
Tell her everythings alright
Take her down
With those monsters
She'll be fine
Just tell her everythings alright
Another girl dies
In her sequened lies
Heartbroken on takeoff he flies
Stole her heart
Right from the start
We all knew there was nothing we could do
And their's nothing we can do
And their's nothing we can do
And their's nothing she can do |
Krackers
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 27675 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:12am o___o That was amazing. |
Retro Suicide
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 103 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:14am Is that a poem or a song? Just asking because it's written more like a song and it sounds really good. Reminds me of the music my band played... before we broke.
Anywho it's good. I like it. I think the syllables are a little off for the rhyming but if you say it to the write speed it sound alright. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 30th, 2006 at 06:58am Awesome. I really liked this one. Damn, you're getting too good. |
DirntMachine900
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 12 | July 30th, 2006 at 11:19am Wake her up
On the bathroom floor
Wipe her tears
Cure her fears
Tell her everythings alright
Take her down
With those monsters
She'll be fine
Just tell her everythings alright
I loved this verse. Great job!
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Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657 | July 30th, 2006 at 01:39pm I REALLY likes that!!! well done ! |
